Poetry Experiments

[mynewplace]

Scarlett was challenged to write two poems using many of the same words to express different ideas. The ideas could be related but not the "same".  They are very simple concepts, but I was pleased to see her results, especially the first one. Here's what she wrote.

 The Dark Moon

 The dark moon
breathed dreams
on the cold
earth and
stars dance about
like a summer storm.

 Dream 

Wide open spaces
stars and moons
the dark earth
summer storms
May they dance
about in your
head as you
sleep.
Sweet Dreams.

 

Comments

[el-jefe59.livejournal.com]

She's good! I also love the first one especially!

[sapphirescarlet.livejournal.com]

Thanks much Jeff!